I see your mountains
so vast and tall
waterfalls bouncing
multiple feet walls
Your eagles fly
to heights unseen
and this is just
your early team
Elephants that are hardy
ants that graze
and your Seas
doth so amaze
No matter where
my gaze stops by
I see total wonders
in each eye
Then I look upon myself
my struggles peeking through
as I pose the question
what in myself should I view?
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I love the immages and the depth of your muse depicting HIS strength..I love it..thank you so much for sharing it..well done my friend...
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This is wonderful...
relating what God has done in nature's wonders that reflects on the finest things about you God has placed. I like this write muchly.
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?muchly? hahahaha that sounds like a lot hahahaha thank you so much
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A great way to admire nature and the beauty of it. All the while wondering why we don't see the inner beauty of Gods creation in us. A very deep thought.
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Thanks so much, Z, you've hit the hammer on the nail
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everything well that sums that up lol now i have to ramble to get to one hundred characters so my comment takes, a good poem.
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Well hahaha you answered that rather easily hahha perhaps my question was too simple ...smile and thanks
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