The Sun rises
And so do i
One more day
To fly by
This day like no other
A secret it hides
Inocence lost
A thorn in my side
A friendship was formed
And destroyed in a day
He kissed me and touched me
In a horrible way
My home was my haven
My space to be me..
Now it is broken
For all eternity
People laugh
And say it was nothing
HE ASSULTED ME i scream..
Ofcoures it was something!!
My uncle my hero
My saviour from harm
He kiked the boy out
And all with such Calm!
I brake down in tears
And fall in his arms
Saftey a last
Free from Harm..
Author notes
Ok its kinda crap i know
but the story of my day in a poem!
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bravo
aww i really like this piece and the fact that it has a happy ending, deliverence from evil.
the rythme was perfect too..thanks
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Hun, this is NOT crap, I really like this poem, the story behind this is, unfortunately, something that happens to a lot of people, you did a wonderful job, as always, the flow in the second stanza is a little rocky, but beyond that, I have no complaints. Great job!
~Chanel Renee'
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this isn't crap. i really liked this and im sorry your day went like this.
really great and really emotional -
wow that was really tuff, i hope ur ok, or is it just a poem?
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It is far from "crap" perhaps you need to talk things over with your Uncle. Don't let people say "it was nothing" It may be the start of something serious.
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