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The Unknown Dark House

The lights flicker in the house.

It's so quite you can't even hear a mouse.

You you walk down the hallway not knowing what's in front of you.

You walk past bedrooms and you hear a snooze.

You flip the switch but yet still darkness.

You feel like your house is empty and heartless.

You trip on your robe and your face hits the floor

For once you wish that you wouldn't have ever opened your door.

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  • Nice poem

    ooooo This sounds scary... I lived in a house that I thought was really creepy... I heard a sound and I went to where I thought it was and I swear something moved... I wished I had just stayed in my room.
    -Draggie