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The Return

 

 

Deliberately stepping, one in front of the other
Exacting pressures, so as not to disturb the ground
Walking, my head is held high and my shoulders back
Retracing old steps, seeking out what can not be found.

Privately praying, at iron doors banded and black
Knocking assures, as it doth for all of mine own ilk
Kneeling, eyes down cast, my body held at the ready
Awaiting the past, wanting the feel of coiled silk

Patiently abiding, my thoughts no longer steady
Numbing occurs, stone becomes a part of flesh
Sighing, minutes morph into that of many hours
Emulating a sage, braving the new day afresh

Gingerly crawling, as one would unto the bowers
Abiding cures, memories rise forth and haunt
Straining, arms leaden, my mind is barren and hollow
Opening the door, moving in search of my life fount

Quietly weeping, on nude walls my gaze does follow
Hearing tours, half heard ghosts whom whisper in my ear
Shaking, cold seeps deep within the marrow of my bones
Believing at last, seeing they've gone and left me here

Despondently crying, echo mocks heart wrenched moans
Discarding Ajoure's, as per the edictal custom
Wailing, my emotions begin to die and whither
Retreating a bliss, locking out all known axiom.

 

 

 

Author notes

This one has a most weird rhyming scheme, easier to read top to bottom then side to side.

AbC
BdE
B F
BbE

abE
BdG
B H
BbG

aBH
BdI
B J
BbI

abJ
BdK
B L
BbK

AbL
BdM
B C
BbM

Each line is to a 13 count. Please Enjoy.

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Comments

  • Bob Fox
    August 9

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    Rev.

    As I read this I got a vision of a self made Purgatory. the depth of despair so evident . Dreams, nightmares, could only bring such words from my mind. Powerful and dark poet.


  • Sunduiri
    July 15

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    stunning

    M'Lady I am proud of you for being able to do this poem. it is sad and lovely. I honestly started to cry feeling your longing. I pray that one day you will find your hearts desire