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So...Tell Me


My presence
my body,
How my skin feels;
you never thirst for the
purity of my Affection.
You act as if,
my Love
is an Infection
while your erection;
Dies
when I touch you.



So tell me....


A Virtuous Woman;
your woman!
A mother
of your children!
A hard working Wife
YOUR wife!
Given to you....
yet your appreciate
goes without words.

So tell me
Again,
how can you Love something that you obviously

Hate?




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  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    September 6

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    powerful hun...
    but I am glad I read your latest before this one
    and that you now realize it's not you, it's himself he has to deal with...

    wonderfully expressed as always,
    I have faith you will find your way

    Tasha


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 6

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    Oh gosh. This was so sad and heartbreaking. I have been in this position. It's the most life sucking place to be.
    You did a fantastic job portraying it.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • awannabepoet
    August 18

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    Life is what it is and you know with time we can sometimes confound the two as what once seemed sublime now can somehow go unnoticed and almost sub-prime.

    I am sorry to read this as you seem to have something special to give in this life but in the end so many people fall down this rabbit hole you know.

    I like it, I like it so!


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    August 8

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    WoW Sis deep piece here,
    i've in the past had wondered
    this very same tail. very glad
    that what was once for me
    is no longer a part of my life.
    so i can say that i use to be
    able to relate. and i thank
    God big time that it's over
    for me. i for one never really
    understood how someone
    could love someone that they
    obviously... hate? hate is
    such a sad word, painful,
    hard word. how can anyone
    bring their self to feel such
    away without good cause???

    i've missed you, glad i stopped by, even if your poem is sad.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    love ya,
    your sis
    joyce


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    August 3

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    this is extremly painful to read, knowing all too well what this feels like,
    penned with a heart filled, with many emotions,
    thank you for sharing your heart,

    Blessings always

    Rend


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    July 31

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    There is some intense deep pain within these words. Some men don't appreciate a good woman. It's sad it really is, they don't know what they have until it's gone. You deserve so much more sissy, so much better. Though that doesn't stop the pain and make is lessen. I'm here for you. I love you

    s x infinity
    Kat


  • Whenitefallz
    July 7

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    The word bricks of your wall are a solid, burning thing in this. I can feel the cement drying..

    "My presence
    my body,
    How my skin feels;
    you never thirst for the
    purity of my Affection.
    You act as if,
    my Love
    is an Infection
    while your erection;
    Dies
    when I touch you."

    Just whoa & WOW!! You know I love your work..


    • Ephiphany
      July 7
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      Thank you so much!

      u know I appreciate you always my friend


  • HaleyMary
    July 5

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    Very powerful words, Sis. You express your emotions well in this piece. It makes me think of anger, maybe resentment like, giving so much love, but receiving none in return. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


    • Ephiphany
      July 6
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      Thanks for the comment

      u are definately appreciated.
      Take care


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    July 3

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    I know these kind of feelings so well...and it took me long to realise what I had to do with them..
    But I am sure you will find out too....when time is ready

    XXJeannette


  • Floatational
    July 2

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    Wow such powerful words a lot of people not just women I see ask those same questions. You have a wonderful play on words here I love the poem, but they need to know that they must find their sunshine within the joy of GOD once again this is excellent have a blessed day.

  • Sun-shiney
    July 2
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    oh baby im sure its not true hate? why do you think that. please tell me has he ever beat you?

    • Ephiphany
      July 2
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      Oh No, sweetheart

      Ty for the comment, but there aren't any beatings involved
      thanks so much for your concern though.
      I really appreciate you

      e


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 2

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    Many pigs, I mean men don't appreciate a sweet soul like yourself unless she's gone. I see this is not marked personal, so, no worries I'm guessing. Love the way you captured the reader in me with your strong voice. Pen on Piff, much love, Timothy


  • ennovy silver member
    July 1

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    honey there's trouble in paradise when it gets that bad. you have capture some deep emotion of pain
    here your talent shines but am worried about your heart....love ya...g'momma


  • darell
    July 1

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    Speechless..

    I LOVE YOU DEARLY.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 1

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    Deep powerful writing here Piff. Your emotion really comes through here. Such anger and confusion within the words here. Maybe this is a question that will never be answered. Very well-written indeed.

    Dark Wishes
    Wayne Leon
    x

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