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falling apart

i feel my world falling apart
i cant grasp this life any more
i remain in the silence and in the darkness of the life's lies,
i see the shadows of my life fading away from me
living on the edge of the cliff and no hand to help me up
my life is getting squeezed right out of my me
all i can do is fall down to my knees and scream out as loud as i can
but no one will hear me my screams are silent from the world,
i see things that are out to get me
i feel things that no one else feels
i am falling apart
you see white
i see black,
you see life
i see death,

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  • Cowboy
    July 3

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    sis rememmber that even in the darkness teir can be hope many of us are still heir for you and always will be