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St0l3n L1f3

Look at me the life I live...
An unknown force has taken what I love....
Now I walk an unseen path through the darkness....
Unheard and unseen by all I continue on this dark path...
A cross around my neck and a hatchetman on my back...
I walk with all I've got left...
And I would give it all away...
Just to have someone to come home to....
But as I walk on in the fading light I realize that my dream is far fetched...

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