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Beauty of life.

The music fills my head. I feel my head start to sink into
the slow beauty of the instruments playing.
All in tune with the other. Yet, all individual. My heart
falls through the seams. I feel beautiful when I
let my body go. I move to the graceful beat of the music.
My heart is a bird flying high. The slow music makes my
heart sing softly and my mind at ease.
Take me to a beautiful place.
Lock me in the beauty of the Cappella Sistina. Take me
away where the sky meets the land, let me lay in
the grass. Where the ground soaks
up the sunlight. Where I feel like I belong.
Let the amazed eyes take in the world around. Let me lay 
my head on the soft clouds.
Let the world around me; inspire. 

Author notes

I was listening to some classical music.
Clair de Lune by Debussy is what inspired me to write this.
Enjoy.

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Comments

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  • WOW. i loved it. Very inspirational, great way of puttin this to words. you really did a good job at explainin how music relates to us and how it effects us. i loved it. great write. who would you like to be in my AP family?


  • queenie
    July 3

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    music does that to you and if you are lover of classical music you will be privy to insruments that lure you into this state. you have been really descriptive here but you have also let your emtions show the descritions. my best to you in the contest.


  • tritium
    July 1
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    I enjoyed reading that, as the imagery and metaphorical constructs seem to blend harmonically.

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