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Mill Stream Memories

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In morning silence wheel idly stands
Memories watching ripples long ago
Generations have basked in sunrise
Listened to wheel's churning tempo

Quaintness of setting, far removed
Inhale quietude, enjoy the relaxation
Away from hustle, bustle of everyday
Let the mind fill with vivid imagination

Flat stones skipped far side of the pond
The catfish biting, children gone fishing
How I miss those times of simple things
As I lay upon the green banks wishing

Sun glisten on water shine on the ice
Seasons change through winter to fall
Thoughts gather, moments to cherish
Sweet memories rush, I sit and recall

 

 

Author notes

This is a picture of Mabry Mill along the Blue Ridge Parkway in Virginia.Taken by Julie Leigh

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 16

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    "Flat stones skipped far side of the pond
    The catfish biting, children gone fishing " --> what beautiful lines

    I found myself wishing I had memories
    like this to comfort me and long for;
    alas I do not, but reading this is almost
    enough for me

    Congratulations on the Bronze!
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda


  • Ouranos
    July 24

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    I can't decide which is more peaceful

    the photo or your poem. Both of them make for a pretty picture.

    So, I'll call it a toss-up.

    I especially liked the third stanza, and relish my own memories of the simpler times in my past.

    Wonderful write.


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 25
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      Good Morning

      I am always happy when my poem brings back some nice memories to the reader. Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care. Sandy


  • Laughing at you
    July 3

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    lovely

    funny...i saw this prompt and was gonna enter but was so relaxed looking at the pic i fell asleep lol....this is a great poem superb an excellent desription..........well done.....p.s.....i feel for your loss.......keep well......eric


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 3
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      Hello Eric

      Thank you for the lovely comment. It is a pleasure to have you stop by. Hope your day is going well. Take care. Sandy


  • Katie Lazette
    July 2

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    Beautifully written Sandi. How good it is to reminesce of the old days. I can remember a building made of stones and it had a waterwheel. I just can't remember where it was. I think it was in another state from where I lived. Anyway they are still a beautiful site to see.

    • Sandygram silver member
      July 3
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      Thank You Katie

      Thank you for reading and commenting. You take care, Hugs and Smiles, Sandy


  • Floatational
    July 2

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    The imagery of this poem and the words just puts the soul at ease and makes one feel as if everything will be alright and at that very moment they have not a care in the world. This is brilliant and lovely and so Sandy I love this.


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 3
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      Hello

      A pleasure to have you stop by and read. I appreciate your lovely comment. You take care and have a nice day. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy

  • drapedindarkness
    July 2

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    Calm and refreshing
    This makes me want to cry
    Such wondrousness all around
    Has seemed to pass me by


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 3
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      Well Hello There

      It is a pleasure to have you stop by and read. So glad you enjoyed. I will send you hugs and smiles to cheer you. so you may enjoy the beauty all around you. Hope you have a nice day .
      Bless You, Sandy

  • midnightblue1272
    July 1

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    *chuckle*

    As I read this, I could suddenly hear the theme from the old Andy Griffith Show playing in my head. Seriously, nice picture & nice take on that picture. Good one, Auntie Sandy.


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 3
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      Well Hello Dear Nephew.

      Yes it does remind me of Mayberry , I can almost smell aunt Bee's home,made apple pie.
      Always so nice to have you stop by and read. Thank you for the wonderful comment. You take care. Hugs and Smiles, Aunt Sandy

  • mcheadle
    July 1
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    Loved the poem excellant write

    Loved the picture, where else can one's mind drift back in time...mac


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 3
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      Thank You Mac. Sending you bunches of hugs and Smiles to Ohio. Enjoy the weekend.
      Hugs and Smiles, Sandy


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 1

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    I love this here poem. I like the way you describe the picture. I could picture it in my head. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.

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