Cross over to me
Amazing things await us
On our life's journey
Author notes
Sanity's haiku challenge.... fun fun fun.... thank you sanity
Written March 22nd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- haikus by .
300 points, ended April 15, 2004, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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beautifully expressed!
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Can't Stop Believin'...
Hey!!! Shitty band, my ass!! Geez... Steve Perry has one of the best voices around... granted, their newer stuff is nowhere as good as some of their earlier work... but shitty band?? Never... a shitty band would be something like Ratt or Twisted Sister!! Sheeesh.
(Just messin' with you!! Heh)
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feet move on their own accord under the keyboard, as heart quickens with intrigue and the challenge of sharing an entire world with you, unknown at all to me, and yet the bridge connects us in a new way worthy of trying....Artis
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Oh.. I liked this. I'm not a fan of Haiku's... mainly because I don't know them much. But this one, in 3 lines, you've said quite a bit. And, with this picture.. they really mean something. Cross the bridge, there's new things over there, new life... very nice write!
~Aimee
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This is a really great poem...it was short, but sweet...I like the picture too...well great job
-seby
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Wow, this is so short...but it means soooo much!!! Great write, i really like this one...something kind of mystical in a way, but don't listen to me i'm so weird...
Take care
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A haiku paints a thousand words and a picture
Yay! Lovely haiku! Are you sure you've never written one before!!!! I just love it!
Peace and love
Susan
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What a lovely haiku - I read the caption and was thinking huh? Then it finally dawned on me (duh JOURNEY sheesh it's a wonder I'm not blonde sometimes lol)...excellent job
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wow-- another stunning peice.. the omage is especially lush... i really love your work hun, keep it up!
xxx
Scarlet -
Thank you. I had perfect inspiration for it.
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that was beautiful first haiku ive ever read from you
and it was perfect.
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