Hello beautiful Moon
Nice to see you again
Tonight your majesty radiates through the sky
My love, what can I say?
You are to die for
Any lovers dream
Any dreamers romance
Any wanderers hope and guide
The night is aglow with your elegance
Stars gather 'round
To bask in your beauty
Together the heavens look like a celestial ball
Every guest dances across the universe
Singing the praises of the Creator
Presenting their ethereal beauty to the world
Who watches below
But all good things must come to an end
Hints of morning slowly eliminate the darkness
So goodnight, Moon!
I'll wait in longing
Until tonight
Author notes
Prompt: Goodnight Moon
Photo Credit: Starry Night by JJGP(deviantart.com)
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A glimps inside your heart I've found, wonderfully written, I can't express how rare it is to find a poem that speaks more of it's authors heart than one that names their greatest love. Well done. 3 cheers. CC
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Great job! Brilliant! Amaing! Awesome! Magnificent!
Good luck!
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You had some nice imagery, but as far as the meaning is concerned, I wish you had shown it more rather than bluntly told...it's just personal preference. Still I enjoyed this, so thank you for entering.
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"So goodnight, Moon!
I'll wait in longing
Until tonight"
I love this ending. beautiful imagery.
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Lovely poem full of rich imagery befitting for a lovely picture. I loved the ending to this piece! Thanks so much for entering my humble contest. It’s an pleasure and honor to read your wonderful work
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no sorry.
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well i certainly expected one of these. ^_^ but not this good. excellent language and imagery, as would be expected of a poem like this. love the picture; thanks for entering and good luck
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beautiful pic to match a pretty poem! Thanks for the entry!
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WOW! I loved this!
it was really good. spectacular imagery and incredible metaphor. You are truly talented, and I hope that your ink never ceases to flow. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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The picture is GORGEOUS.
And I love the feel of this write. It's beautiful
you have talent, don't stop writing darling.
thanks for entering.
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ARRRGGHH! You told me your user name. Gawd from now on I am insisting no one enters poems for my contests into others until they are judged or they'll be DQ'd. I enjoyed this but I really need these contests to be anonymous!
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an elegant piece you created here, thank you for entering
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beautiful peace..majestic..and the nature calls...the moon is displayed so wonderfully..the write is full of personalized thought and great imagery..nice job
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"My love, what can I say?
You are to die for
Any lovers dream
Any dreamers romance
Any wanderers hope and guide"
This is so pretty! And thanks you for your great comment on my page
You did an excellent jon here
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Love the picture & as I read the poem I could see
the beauty & feel the yearning behind these
words...very nice
Thank you also for the comment on my write..take
care.
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i loved this! it was so pretty! just...WOW! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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This was good.
I liked it cuz it was longer than mine.
Good luck!!!
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Wow. That was really pretty!
Loves it.
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Thanks, Jenny!
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Aw I liked this, it was very sweet! Made me smile! and a great use of the prompt if I do say so myself, my favorite part was:
The night is aglow with your elegance
The stars gather 'round
To bask in your beauty
And I also loved the waiting you begun and ended the poem. Good job, was a nice read!
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