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Soon

Soon will come the time
  when shadows will fall away.
When life refuses to die,
  we’ll have what we pray.

Sums of souls will be reached.
He has met His quota.
Sermons will cease to be preached.
All things will be over.

Come, O Lord, and be the Light.
Be the reason we remain.
Grant us, Lord, what is our right,
  given through Your name.

Let us delight in time’s end,
  for we’ll not end with it.
Let us see Him who will rend
  the things that broke our spirits.

Our heart’s ache will be heard,
  with a shout from on high.
We will heed the holy Word.
  It’s to Him we’ll fly.

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  • Samplette gold member
    July 14

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    I truly enjoyed reading this lovely piece of poetry. Soft and beautifully penned. One thing I will point out is in the second stanza the third line, I think you want "cease" in place of "ceased" Other than that, great write. Thank you for entering the contest and supporting our group.
    Sam

  • a good poem which is full of light and love in the nqme of spitituality and faith and smiles in life, so yeah all i can say is a good poem pened


    • M0ofi3
      July 22
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      I hope it's more than a poem of spirituality. Anyone one can be spiritual, this is a spiritual world.

      My desire that this would be Biblical, which this is based upon.

      Thanks...

  • through the hand of God
    above All
    wonderful write of truth and faith
    God bless you my friend...

  • Wonder-filled poem!

    Yes and amen.

    "Let us delight in time’s end,/for we’ll not end with it."

    - joanne -

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