Every morning at dawn
When there's a nightly essence still
I glance out my window pane
To behold the most charming grace
I saw them with peaceful wings
With keen empty eyes
I feel their silent cries
Their lament and joys in the still dawning sky
The ghostly creatures have captivated
My soul, my heart and my being
Every flutter of wings in the wonder silence
Keeps my mind and heart in constant thunder
The longing has been kept in consistency
To be like them and roam the silvery waters free
To bathe in the illusory illumination
Of the moon with the seraphic gleam
But longings of the heart may disappoint me
For I could never be a soul and body
Of a lightweight keenly transcendental body
down in the the ethereal Swan lake as I wish to be
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A lovely write
This is an amazing write very elegantly written the imagery is beautiful and so is the flow and rhyme of words does captivate one's thoughts what the eye of the mind see's is the beauty you have brought out in the nature of the poem.Excellent poem,loved every word.Very beautiful write and woudn't change not one word.Bravo!
God Bless
Sharon Marie
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate that! ^_^
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Beautiful idea! I think you have presented this very well, and I love the concept and imagery...double check your spelling, and content. You used has rather than have in one line, and I don't think you need the in front of every, but other than that...very lovely indeed! Thanks for your entry!
faith
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thank you very much for the correction. ^_^
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The longing has been kept in consistency
To be like them and roam the silvery waters free
To bathe in the illusory illumination
Of the moon with the seraphic gleam
I love this stanza. excellent write. thanks for taking the time to enter.
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great
Excellent job.
Thanks for entering.
Good luck.
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"The longing has been kept in consistency
To be like them and roam the silvery waters free
To bathe in the illusory illumination
Of the moon with seraphic gleam"
The whole write was outstanding, But i really enjoyed that part, beautifully said, and lovely write!
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thanks! : )
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wow
beautiful... very emotional... i love it... perfect and good job for writing it... you done really well... i mean thanks for sharing.... -
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thanks.
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