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MOONLIGHT - a cinquain

Missing image
Full moon,
cheese-like, cloud veined,
beams over a dark sea
to where, at sandy water's-edge,
I stand.

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    July 15

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    What a beautiful image you paint, it left me wanting more but I know this packed the perfect punch of beauty as cinquains often do. Well done and best to you in the contest


    • Shenton silver member
      July 15

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      A G

      Thankyou for your very complimentary comments and for your good wishes.
      Best wishes from 'down-under'.
      Shenton


  • Mirthryl
    July 14
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    Very nice imagery. I particularly enjoyed "cloud veined." Lovely pic accompanies this well.


    • Shenton silver member
      July 14
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      Mirthryl

      Thankyou for your very complimentary comments, and for your most generous applause.
      Best wishes from 'down-under'.
      Shenton