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Hearts distruction

let these words make you brave
in your hearts distruction
hold the flame that is your light
in your hands adore it
through the doors you must go
guided by your second sight
its the pain you had to feel
for your joys to smile
for the love with in you is still
loving everyday

Let the ones waiting there
just for you forever
welcome home a long lost soul
another weary traveler
through the halls you must go
with their wonders shining
all your life's hope's and dreams
now consume the fire
for the love with in you is still
burning every day

so I won't say goodbye

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