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Is This What It Feels Like?

Silent tears run down her face
As she tries to hold in every bit of pain she feels
Even though it is leaking out of her
She is strong, She won't break
She never has before...

Things. Change.

Everyone turns their back
As she screams out her sobs
And gasps in her breaths
She is silent no longer

Please tell me what you think

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  • brought.me.to.life
    July 5
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    Oh My,
    You captured your feelings perfectly!
    This was truly a beautiful poem.