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Don't let it go boy!

I don't know what to sing..
you could sing anything...
or if you want too..
I'll tell you what to do!
I want to feel fine..
if you can look me in the eye
I don't want say say no more
but I'm gonna say

"if the light shine's down on you ,
don't let it go boy! Its a sin"
"and if a love came back to you,
would you let it in?"

If you wanna find me..
look in the black sea..
I can't use that name?No!
Everybody say's so
I wanna feel rage..
but can't get over this page..
I don't think I can write..
the story of my life

But if the light shine's down on you,
don't let it go boy! Its a sin
and if a love came back to you
would you
let it in

Oh my attitude
force my view's upon you
I'm a back off your space
I'm too in your face
I know when I have to go
Before you can tell too
I like to feel rage
but can't write this page

and if the light shines down on you'
don't let it go boy! It's a sin!
and if a love came back to you,
would you,let it in?

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