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So Much

So much disgrace
Given to a race
Of only me
Why can't they open their eyes to see
Who I can really be

So much sorrow and pain
I'm so close to going insane
Mounds and mounds of terror and fear block my path
Everyone with some kind of hidden wrath

I'm going nowhere on an empty train
Alone and Afraid I don't know what to do
The pain is unbearable
So much pain

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  • ScarletStainedTears
    August 10
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    i feel the same way and this was good write i liked the rhyming and the emotion in it