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Living In A Coma

In distant time she waits
For tomorrow she will be here no more.
Lost in a world which no longer exists.

She waits for the storm to rumble in.
For her lifetime of suffering to be no more.
She has been here for too long.

In distant time she waits
For tomorrow she will be here no more
Lost in a world which no longer exists.

Loosing sight on reality.
She tries to wake from this foggy dream.
But its too hard she doesn't understand
Why this happening to her.

In distant time she waits
For tomorrow she will be here no more
Lost in a world which no longer exists

Days never ending
Darkness never leaving
The child has grown cold
Believing that death is her only choice

In distant time she waits
For tomorrow she will be here no more
Lost in a world which no longer exists

Until she hears a faint voice
Traveling in from the darkness above
Could this be the light that she has only dreamed of?

In distant time she waits
For tomorrow she will be here no more
Lost in a world which no longer exists

"Honey, please wake-up mommy misses you."
This voice its so familiar thought the child
Could this mean the light might come back to me?

In distant time she waits
For tomorrow she will be here no more
Lost in a world which no longer exists.

"Hun, mommy needs you please wake-up."
This is it, I'm going to follow the voice.
But the child travels on and on
No where can she find the mystical voice.

In distant time she waits
For tomorrow she will be here no more
Lost in a world which no longer exists.

Wrapped in her black musty hair
The child cries wishing the light would just come.
As she sits there she sees the sun.
Its rising over the edge
The darkness is gone

In distant time she no longer waits
For today she will be here no more
Found in a world which no one could reach.

Brought forth by her mothers voice
So sweet, so pure

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  • foreveryourslove
    November 9
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    good job though the repeativness is kinda strong... thank you for entering and i wish you the bestest of luck also! ~jasmine~