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Just

Just a glare sends me into a spin
Like a cocktail of corrupt street drugs
Which you have always been to me,
A dose of freshly laced ecstasy.

Just flushing at your every smile
Singing to my eager rush of blood
At anything that stirs the ember,
Of a thought that I remember.

Just gushing to your howling aura
As cross-hairs latch onto on you -
A psychotic pot of pleasure
Unleashed at your leisure.

Just staring, glaring, so overwhelming,
Blasted by an explosion of radiation
Splicing clean through my mind,
Vigour and rigour intertwined.

Just craving for affirmation
Of desire that cannot dissolve,
The mind releases a scream
From bursting at the seams.

Just a pounding into reality,
Destroying, battering all hope,
Grounded down from this pain,
Be single or I'll go insane.

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