she leaves me alone and left in the dark
she lets me die inside
she talks about murder and things that we thought
like attempting her suicide
she makes me regret the things i do
and for every battle i win she fought
my teddy bears don't hug back
but sometimes they're all i've got
she never believes the words i say
and she never trusts my love
she's always doubting my every word
than prays for death from above
one day i guess she'll kill herself
and leave me alone in this world
but when that happens i'll follow her
because she's my amazing girl
so i'll hold my teddy, in my fear
that one day my girl will leave
toss back a twenty-four of beer
cause i know she'll never believe
i tell her i love her and that i always will
that to me she is everywhere
but deep in my heart i fear each day
i'll be alone with my teddy bear
-- EMOverlord
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Omg....this is so sad...it sounds like you love this girl alot...> <. Your an amazing writter..
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I like the raw emotion in this write.
"My teddy bears don't huge back
but sometimes they're all I've got."
I love that stanza. Thanks for entering. -
my teddy bears don't hug back
but sometimes they're all i've got
I absoultly love these lines.
best of luck in my contest.
good luck. -
wow
aww this is so gr8 i wouldnt revise it its really gud this is really aweet in away i luv the part about teddy bears dont hug back
ive heard it b4 (teddybear bit) but its really gr8
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this is the most amazing poem i have ever read....
i love you and would never leave you for something as childish as life being to much. I'm sorry i scared you with making you think that...but i really would never do it. and i do believe everything you say to me....i really do...i'm sorry.
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'my teddy bears don't hug back
but sometimes they're all i've got'
did you get this from pon and zi?
very creative your a talented writer.
this poem made me tear up a bit
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heart wrenching, but the background makes it really hard to read lol
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