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couldn't tell you

no matter what
today may bring
tomorrow will never come
because this moment can last forever
marching to the beat of your own drum
nothing can stop you whatsoever
so lets make this even more clique
and let me tell you that i've gone away
not just another
but the best ever
how can i say yes
when im in distress
one to four months isn't enough
not nearly enough time
to get to know someone
who can never be replaced

my grandfather

why should this be
the only time you've seen me
is on your dying time
but why should i cry
you can see my distress
so why should i say yes
when i was your best ever
now you're just another
so let me tell you that i've gone away
because you didn't even meet me halfway

Author notes

idk, my head hurts

Could this all be in my head?

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  • Robin Candor
    July 1

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    We never meet halfway do we? It's all or nothing isn't it? What a mess we live in when things could be so easy and warming. We could give couldn't we? We could give every way and in so many little ways that would make such a difference. We don't! We burn every bridge we could possibly cross. We are all so screwed up. Great write girl!