Feathery wings flutter underneath me,
angel’s serenade in sensual soul.
Upon each breath one bestows sheer beauty,
enchanting my faithless heart in solo.
As celestial symphonies replay,
lullabies whisper, gentle, teary sighs.
Revealing snippets of photos of gray,
where heaven can hear our virtuous cries.
A rough draft of lonely nights wept silent,
insane searches of divine existence.
Portraits of puddles where paradise went,
leaving scriptures for each souls acceptance.
Refreshing is refuge in times of grace,
weaving quill please erase this painful place.
Author notes
Timothy: Screen Name: poeticweaver Link: http://allpoetry.com/poeticweaver
Picture Prompt: World On Fire I by SpydurPoet at DA.
Link: http://spydurpoet.deviantart.com/art/World-on-Fire-I-116031910
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A contest entry
- Variety Prompt Contest by SpydurPoet.
800 points, ended July 1, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Show some love.
Comments
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Forgot the clappies!!
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This so deserved the gold, you touch my heart, and soul always with your work. The ending, made me just sigh, yes, how I could feel it:
Refreshing is refuge in times of grace,
weaving quill please erase this painful place.
thank you for sharing your talent! Always! Love, Dixie
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Congratulations on the Golden Chalice!!
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As celestial symphonies replay,
lullabies whisper, gentle, teary sighs.
Revealing snippets of photos of gray,
where heaven can hear our virtuous cries.
I guess all I can utter is: Fantastical!!!^_^ -
A rough draft of lonely nights wept silent,
insane searches of divine existence.
Portraits of puddles where paradise went,
leaving scriptures for each souls acceptance.
Refreshing is refuge in times of grace,
weaving quill please erase this painful place.
This piece is ethereally beautiful. I loved every single word.
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congrats seem so shallow when you extend them to someone whose writings have the nature of winning. you are a humble person, my love and i know you appreciate the accolades, but they fall short of what you truly deserve. however knowing you are who you are i congratulate you on being you.
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weaving quill. I like that image most.
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my dearest a well deserving golden as your heart reigns with a profound epiphany of sorrow mixed with hope in the silenced peace of disdained wonder. You have brought light through tears shed as I read your mastery and message of hope. well done and many blessings always xxxx love you!!!
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beautifully woven
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Needed.
Tim,
Thee have penned a poem for which perfectly mirrors that for which I find mine own self feeling at this time. I bow to thee.
Rev. Alimae
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A well earned gold! This is incredible! Very beautiful!
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WOW
Very powerful, i felt every word in this, my man..outstanding!
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Didnt this poem perfectly deserve the gold baby? I loved the images you draw.. the thoughts, they are so deep! You have to stop and ponder over it, i read it twice.. Beautiful, one of your besties! Keep writing love
Love always,
Lonely
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pure gold poeticweaver! You are always a winner in my eyes.
Much love,
Judy
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As your heart speaks so poignantly,
the images play in the reader's mind.
Then you drop in----
"...Portraits of puddles where paradise went,"
and one has to stop just to repeat it aloud!!!
May you find your refreshing refuge, Timothy.
M-C
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Spectactular
Well my awesome poetic brother this one one mighty fine well penned write comin' from you. I really love the whole surreal meaning behind the writing and espically love the deep methaphoric imagery penned through out the poem as well. over all this is one really strong write and I really love this poetic madness your muse is spinning for us all. its not a suprise that you won the Gold congrats on that and well keep penning away gemstone beauties like this write from ya
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Awesome write here bro!!! I loved that picture she took, and you did well with your choice! A great depth of beauty, of pain, and of heart. Excellent write! Congrats on the gold!
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Oh my such wonderful imagery, makes the angels just stand out, once again a brilliant write. Blessings.
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Beautifully Expressed!
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As always, heart and soul..you amaze me
Loving you always
good luck
Passions
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Oh my. Oh my. I love this. I love this so much. Thank you so much for entering, I can't wait to see who you are because "A rough draft of lonely nights wept silent" is the most beautiful line I have ever read.
Good thing you entered, too, it's almost over.
Thanks for entering.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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