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~ Chasing Rainbow's ~

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A rainbow doesn't stay too long ,for
everyone to see . So I hurry to the
end of it . To what awaits for me .
~
At the end of my rainbow , if you
believe the story true . I found all
the treasure I could ever long for .
Not gold , nor jewels , but you !
~
I need not a pot of gold ! It can't keep
me warm , when nights grow cold .
I need your love , it's the only thing .
'Tis a treasure gold , could never bring .
~
Now each time I see a rainbow , arched
across the velvet skies . I think of you and
and our love so true . As these colours
refract before mine eyes .
~
So hurry , chase " your rainbow " ! Do not
wait til it's too late on your next rainy day .
Or the happiness that you may seek , could
quickly fade away ...

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From prompt : write a rhyming poem , for Carolyn ....

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  • A floatingleaf silver member
    September 15
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    Absolutely beautiful...so romantic...

  • poetrymd
    August 19
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    beautitul

    great metaphors in a style only you could deliver


    • Ez Writer silver member
      August 19
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      Hi Michael ! Nice hearin from the poetrymd !
      Thank for the kind words , on my poetry ..
      Glad you liked this poem of Rainbow's .
      Take care , Best regards - Friend Easy

  • Such magic and wonder here
    Unlike the rainbow, Not to disappear
    Feeling the hope for love
    Find that rainbow looking above


    • Ez Writer silver member
      July 29
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      Thank you my friend , for stopping by and
      for your inspiring comment ! I appreciate
      your support and encouragement ! Take care ,
      Best regards , Easy


  • Sonja
    July 9

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    Thank your this poem in colors of rainbow. It has a good rhyme and flow. It's obvious that you know how to live your own fairy tale.
    ~Sonja~


    • Ez Writer silver member
      July 10
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      Hi Sonja ! Nice to meet you here AP . Thank you
      for your lovely comment !! Take care &
      Best wishes , Friend Easy


  • LittleMoon silver member
    July 3

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    Another one of your lovely writes. Simple and a pleasure to read. Sheila


    • Ez Writer silver member
      July 3
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      Hi Sheila !!

      Thank you for your lovely comment !!
      Have a happy 4th Of July !!
      Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy


  • Sandygram silver member
    July 3

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    So Beautiful

    Hi Easy, I just love poems about rainbows and yours is wonderful. There is something so romantic about them and you have captured it within your beautiful words and imagery. A delight to read. Hugs and Smiles.

    Alwayts, Sandy

  • Yes, Yes, Yes you have made this poem wonderful and your usage of the rainbow to represent love is simply astonishing. You simply stole the show as the rainbow stole your heart.


    • Ez Writer silver member
      July 2
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      Hi Courtney !

      Thank you my friend for wonderful comment !!
      I always appreciate your input and your support !
      Have a great day !!
      Best regards , Friend Easy

  • Rainbows are a thing of beauty, just remember to not chase them under a knighted sky. Rainbows do not hide hidden treasure only the special feeling that all colors could be confounded into one and love still has a place in this world.

    I like it, I like it so!


    • Ez Writer silver member
      July 2
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      Good mornin Angelo !!

      Thank you for visiting my page today !
      Glad to hear you enjoyed my poem and I
      thank you for your nice comments ! I do
      appreciate your support !
      Best regards , Friend Easy

      • You are most welcome and it is the smallest thing i could possibly do.

  • Hey Easy,
    Thanks for the rainbow. I could really use one about now.
    That would means we've had some rain, something we haven't had in 20 days. Your rainbow should feel very blessed by this poem. I enjoyed this read.
    Good luck in the contest.


    • Ez Writer silver member
      July 1
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      Aww , i've got enough rainbows to share !
      I'll send one your way , today ..
      Thank you for your lovely comment !!
      Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy

  • This is truly beautiful YOu did an excellent job on this piece.

    "~
    So hurry , chase " your rainbow " , they
    Never stay . Don't wait til it's too late ,
    On your next rainy day . Or the happiness
    That you seek ; may quickly fade away . "


    I chased my rainbow and it did get away. Thank you for sharing.


    • Ez Writer silver member
      July 1
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      Hi Leona ! Glad you liked my poem !
      Sorry that first rainbow got away .
      It was meant to be . But the "next"
      rainbow that comes , that one won't get away ..
      Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy

  • they come in color bright as the sun
    puts a smile on your face
    and then they are gone
    we need to stop and smell the roses
    before their petals fall
    and enjoy all life's beauty
    before there is no more
    beautiful hugs Angel♥


    • Ez Writer silver member
      July 1
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      Hi Angel !!

      Well ; a poem for a poem , what a great deal I got !
      Thank you , your lovely comments always mean a lot !!
      Have a great day ...
      Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy

  • Beautiful, as always!!! This wright is just flawless. Here we're having rain almost everyday, but I didn't see the rainbow for a while. With your great imagery, you helped me find one, right here in my room.
    Nela


    • Ez Writer silver member
      July 1
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      Hi Nela !!

      I'm glad my poem helped you see your rainbow today !
      I "always knew ", one would pass your way !!
      Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy


  • Icy girl
    July 1
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    I love your imagination in this. Great story as well.


    • Ez Writer silver member
      July 1
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      Hi Terra !

      Thank you for stopping by and for your inspiring comments
      They always make my day !! Take care ,
      Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy


  • Denerica silver member
    June 30
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    I love this...rainbows are my significant sign of the promise, romantic and beautiful. Blessings.


    • Ez Writer silver member
      June 30
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      Hi Denise !!

      Thank you so much !! I just love seeing rainbows !
      Glad you stopped by ! Take care ...
      Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy


  • decode
    June 30

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    this was very adorable! I don't normally like rhyme but this was very well executed and had a nice little story to go along with it.

    great poem. best of luck to you in the contest you've entered.


    • Ez Writer silver member
      June 30

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      Aww , thank you very much !! I appreciate
      your lovely comment .. A pleasure to meet
      you here at AP ! Take care ,
      Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy

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