My girl, my perfect girl the one i never want to leave but always have to
Distance tears us apart, and brings us together
God binds us, and god blessed us with each other
I love her, and i have said it, She loves me she has said it
I love her quirk, the one where i have to be on her left side
I love her quirk where my arm has to be behind her arm and the back of her hand facing forward
I love how much she loves being with me
I love how she wishes we were always together
I love how she is everything i have ever wanted
All i have ever wanted was what she is
If she lived in the same city I would bus to her every day and every night
I would kiss her good night and respect her each day
I would never cheat on her and never disrespect her
I have always treated her with the greatest and made her feel like a princess
I don't use her for sex, we don't even make out
All i want from her is her company, and her in my arms.
What did you think
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I don't agree with most of it, but it amused me. And welcome to AP. I'm sure your girlfriend will enjoy reading this.
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btw how can you not agree with it
its a discription of our relationship and what i feel for her
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lol, i dont believe in love. i dont agree with love in general, not just you
thanks for sharing tho, i liked it
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i dont like it....its very typpical how is this different from anyone elses love? i could put anyones names here, u need to discribe her and u as a couple why its special why you love her show me the connection make it personal, be cause right now its boring.....but it has potential....much <3 scars.
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actually this might shock you, but where i live the qualities our relationship have are very well very rare most people i know's relationships shatter, or are based on small things
i can make it much more personal, but that was my first attempt at poetry outside of school, so its my first full hearted attempt at poetry
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lol, the ending lines amused me.
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wonderful * smile* awsome ^.^ i don't have a piture u know that and most deffinetly don't have one of the metal things that other people who commented have but i hope my presents and admoration is enough for a close friend and true i know u all that you said will be as you said. ^.^
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you know that your adoration and presents(??) is enough, i know your a close friend and thats enough
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Welcome to AllPoetry
I hope you show this to her one day - it is a lovely poem of truth, love, dedication and adoration all rolled together
I'm apart from my husband, he is in America and I'm in Australia and he writes me poetry and it always cheers me up
I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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thank you so much, you reallyy think that??
i didnt even know i could write poetry i was scared no one would see this unless i sent the link but people seeing this and liking that makes me happy
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
I really like the way that this poem has the personal details and quirks in it - it really makes it hit home to the reader beautifully done - have you shown her?
Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!
Polly
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No i havent shown her yet, but the girl in my picture
well thats her
the guy is me, and i plan to show her it
i am happy people like it
i never even knew i could write poetry, apparently i can
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