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every day i give him my arm. every day he makes his mark. every day he rights one word. he kisses me and tells me of his love. to keep away the knife to keep me away and to remind me hes just a call away he rights love on my arm.

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  • a good piece of poetry which flows smoothly along the course of creativity, it lingers on the edge of brilliance, shining brightly with poetic bliss. and captures the colours of life, and love. in the folds of heaven eyes shine brightly, wondrously as the sparkled spiralled caress of magnificence sails through the twists and turns of splendid atmosphere. there is a flow that dances along with a smooth rhythm and stylish rhyme.

  • monkey3243
    June 30
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    i like it. its deep and has another meaning


  • jasonstarr
    June 30
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    thats a good poem congrats


  • Tqop
    June 30

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    Outstanding:

    That's wonderful to have someone who looks after you. I'm so happy for you. This is a nice poem. Thanks so much for sharing sweetie.

    Love,
    Tiffany