The sweetest face
the girl so innocent
so simple
with broken wings you can fly
The world is your toy
I care only that you are safe
Your charms are wondereful
Flowers could flounder in comparrison
Your complection of milk
Your eyes of honey and oat
Sweet things are all you havee to say
Goddess bless that you are in sun kissed glory
Jenny is a rose of many colors
She is the kindest person I know of
A contest entry
- Give me your best prewritten poems by Blue-Rose Beauty.
1200 points, ended July 16, 108 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
who is jenny rose?
Comments
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Aw this is really sweet for someone you care about. Good luck in the contest
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Thanks. That was really sweet.
Favorite line: Your complection of milk
Your eyes of honey and oat
Needs improvement: It's spelled complexion.
Overall Grade: 8
Thank you.
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This is sweet I am sure that she will enjoy it you have a great heart thanks for sharing best to you in her contest be well.
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