I hope you fucking die, you god damn piece of shit,
I want to tie you to a tree, light a match and be done with it.
As you scream in pain, you really think Ill look away?
FUCK NO! I could watch that every day.
I wanna tie you to the train track, and watch as your cut in half,
you think I'll end your pain, HELL NO! I'll just fucking laugh.
I would pour acid on you, burn you till you can't scream,
OH but really, that's being nice, I haven't started being mean.
When I get the chainsaw bitch, then you can start to shake,
every little crack or crunch, I would listen to you break.
Your really going to cry, do think it'll even have an effect?
NOPE, I'll still dissect you like a little fucking insect.
I'll set you a blaze and without one second thought,
I'll walk away and leave your fucking corpse to rot.
Author notes
dominated angel25
A contest entry
- ANGER OR DEPRESSION by DeathisSweet.
750 points, ended July 15, 2009, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrites by Lyrical Noob.
550 points, ended July 12, 2009, 122 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW!!!
I guess it's just a great way to just spit all the anger out...
But to tell you the truth...
you're having such a great flow in your poetry
if somebody would hear you say these words they even can start thinking you like them....
GREATGREATGREAT
XXJeannette
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Holy shit! This is a really good poem! I know how ya feel! Congrats on the gold!
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ty so much
angry side is very different from my nice side lmao shhh -
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haha yeahhh I definitely know how that goes! My angry side doesn't come out that often though. Thank god for that! haha!
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This reminds me of some sadistic cat in the hat story written by a female Dr. Seuss.
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really ok
don't know if I should feel insulted right now lol, but ya I like to rhyme ......
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wow this is fucking crazy awesome! I love that pic by the way it's on my my space first time I read a poem about wanting to kill some one in awhile this is fucking awesome
Thank you so much for entering my contest,
And Good Luck!
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the crying bit is often used in revenge list poems
I think in general the torturer wants tear
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TY I think lol
I tried my best to capture just emotion in anger, but without the omg what would people think If I said that, cause umm I dont care lol, I'm just me and I'm great with it!
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wow that is SOME inspiration, whatever/whoever it was. holy shit. I'm scared, lol...
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ya umm the whoever well...
well he's the Master B right here, he got me mad one day so ya lol.... ty Im glad you liked it!
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Holy Shit!!!
This is straight up hate and I know now you aint playin you will straight up torture anyone that fucks with you and your passions in life!!!
-MB
P.S. Note to self stay on your good side!! The other side is not something you want to fuck with lol!!!
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Rhyming nasty and spreading furious pearls of poetic anger...
I see clouds of grey, lightning bolts and the thunder of a woman scorned, let not some poor fool fall under thine wrath there would be little left to speak of.
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great job and the anger -shudders- god this is close to the torture I would inflict if I wasn't so nice
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so like you don't want to go out...?
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lmao
funny lmao wow right at a time i really needed a laugh ty
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