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Leaving

Since no one cares
I am leaving
She left
I have nothing left

She didnt care
she doesnt relize that im not the type
who will fight for very loong
over the same childish stuff
She is staying for her sisters
but i begged her and stuff
and she never wanted to stay
so she never loved me

why did i believe her
who would want me
honestly
im just a faggot
and a loser
whos ugly
and cant get a girl
to love him

Goodbye to my life
i want my razor in my hand
ill grab it now
time to end it

Who would care
honestly

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  • please hold on. you are not a faggot or ugly, you are a wonderful guy who is very lucky to have so many friends. there are so many pple, along with me, who care about you.

  • please dont die big bro!!!! i know whats its like to lose someone i love that only broke my heart but you shouldnt die bc she didnt realise who amazing and special you are...you are not a faggot or ugly you are Rory Williamson...my big bro!!! please dont end your life...please...i have lost so many friends bc of this reason so please...just dont


  • DeathisSweet
    June 30

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    don't kill yourself over me, like you said, you shouldn't care anymore
    and believe or not i do care and so do a lot of people i don't even know why you loved me in the first place, i'm uglier then you and you are not ugly, or a faggot, or any of that shit you said... and i guess i never loved you enough to satisfy you... I tried my best, but that doesn't really matter now does it
    i'm 15 your 18, i am a child, but do what you want... i can't say anything to change your mind


  • XKyleXSmithX
    June 30
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    don't kill yourself
    hell i'm more uglier then you are
    and if ne1 a faggot it's me i told you about all the shit i did in my past.
    plz bro don't kill yourself over a girl
    take it from me i tried it plenty of times but not no more it's not worth it
    you just graduated your life is finnaly starting
    you got a job that you said you love
    you have friends so don't you dare kill yourself

  • I care about you! Please don't end your life. You'll find someone who will love you for who you are. You're not ugly, you're not a faggot. You're Rory! You're a good person she just couldn't see that okay. You deserve way better then her. Don't let her get to you. It's her lost not yours. Please dont die please...I can't stand to lose another person I care about please....

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