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She is everywhere

Look out behind you,
watch your every move.
She has her eyes on you
cat-like, she is ready to pounce.

She is everywhere
one the arms of every stranger
causing my heart to skip a beat,
until I realize it was only a shadow.

She follows me,
red-eyed and hungry
I can run but I can't hide
I am never free

She clucks softly into my ear
my vision blurs, I shut my eyes
but I still see her, clear as day
so I pick up my razor,

try to cut her out.

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  • etoile
    September 2

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    I'm pretty sure you're not on my favourites list so I'm going to have to DQ your entry.
    thanks for entering though, this is quite the dark poem, and I like the images you have here.


  • Scarlet x Stone
    August 12
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    wow!!!! i really like it, espiecially the last two lines xxx