The elements of,
Archangelic consciousness drifted together,
Like a cloud forming in strange weather,
Across an empty sky-
I became aware that an 'I'
Was taking place,
Beyond time space...
Taken in the night,
Drawn toward a brillant light,
I saw my enteric being,
Like someone looking into a pool and seeing,
For the first time the glow of his being,
And loved what he was seeing...
Being drawn into these spiritual scenes,
Was like falling into pleasent dreams,
And becoming aware that pure intellect,
Never arrives to collect,
An answer.
What I wanted was,
And what I was, I wanted.
Out of my own free will,
I received my created being,
And saw the face of God...
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Yes Judy...
Your spiritual eyes are wide open my friend, your beautifully woven poetic insights never fail to stir deep moods within the consciousness...you have a very special gift indeed
'aware that pure intelect never arrives to collect an answer...what I wanted was and what I was I wanted...out of my own free will I received my created being, and I saw the face of God...' how utterly reflective...! (no pun intended!)
absolutely brilliant, what can I say...
Thank you for sharing
John

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No one can teach melodic transcription, as well as the soul does to interpret it. Proceeding to free will an instinctive goes beyond ordinary thinking. When the sounds you hear are thoughts, when the thoughts you taste become trace, only then will you be able to wonder how deep you can truly go writing the unknown as if known to you solely. I inaugurate my previous comment, that this is sublime. Only like-minded poets will be able to ascertain 'pure interllect'.
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ewww, I'm jealous to say, I would have loved to have written this piece in these words. So lovely are the visuals, it's not even a paradox to say we couldn't write the same subject time and time again, this must be one of your best writes. Tony



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it is human perception that creates blindness
What I wanted was,
And what I was, I wanted
simplicity
this is why you can see
lovely vision
beautifully write Poetess
God bless you...


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A wonderful experience. We are being prepared for things to come that have been existing for a long time already. Soon the shells will be removed from our eyes and we will see reality beyond the mass hallucination that is now inflicted on us. Even skeptics and those of limited conditioned scope will experience what you have written about here on this page. I look forward to that. Thank you for creating and sharing, angel.


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Thank you for seeing Light. I believe we both have already experienced the change into light bodies. It was No near death experience. You leave your body behind in such. I took mine with me and it was changed in one feiry instant in the twinkeling of an eye. Yours was changed when the light knocked you out of your computer room that time.
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A universal rose, indeed, sweetness wafting upon the wind. The earth releasing warm kisses surly blessing you. "Elements" as you have titled your words is pure and whole unique as all creations in his image and as he has created you. Your desire for your God and your drive to seek him is strong and renewing like a river. I shall reflect upon your write many times and be blessed as he does you


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Beautiful sweet soul, I sure wish I could see the face of God, all I see are grey clouds, and dark storms that overcast my vision's view. But oh how I love you, and thank you for sharing some light here today within your tender heart of poetry!


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Judy
As always deep and searching poetry. Way beyond the minds of many. God, the universal being and you always make me reach for the dictionary.

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