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gone.

Shes gone
Im lost
Im done
I have no way out
what the hell do I do?

She left without saying why
she basiclly left me to burn
she didnt even bother to stay
she just left

I love her so much.

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  • this is sooo sad why did she leave you you guys were like perfect for each other

  • .. this is so freaking sad, I feel the heart ache and pain within this piece. Sometimes things happened without reason...


  • GothicFyre
    June 30

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    It's depressing but beautiful. Poignant. Getting dumped is shitty - I feel for you dude. It can't have been easy.


  • DeathisSweet
    June 30
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    ... now i deserve to burn in hell... and i will soon
    i'm sorry

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