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Machiavellian Insanity



Gothic black-lettering tattoo
"Machiavelli"
across the dark,
delicate skin
of her upper back.

Tonsured,
Mr. Roger's sweater
and an idiot's twitch.
His medieval smile appreciative,
full of Torquemada's desire.

Moments of insanity
as the 15th century
travels the morning bus.






Author notes

Just another day on the bus

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Comments

  • Lady Syndra
    July 18
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    well done thanks for sharing loved this


  • Wolfdog silver member
    July 1

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    Excellent

    A very fine write, indeed. You have expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • donnz
    June 30
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    Koool !

    excellent choice of vocabulations
    ( the B106 downtown, right? )

  • I liked it. You did a pretty good job writing this. keep up your great work.

    twiztidMaggot