The sun has gone, it's fled the sky,
no longer do the birds fly high,
nothing seems to mean a thing,
since you gave me back my ring.
Once I laughed, now I cry,
once I sang, now I sigh,
you've taken every thing I had,
never knew it would hurt so bad.
You always meant so much to me,
of my heart you'll always hold the key,
my hopes and dreams were built round you,
now all has vanished in the blue.
I'm so sorry for the things I said,
it seems I must have lost my head,
try to forgive, come back to me,
I'll make up for it, just you see!
Please come back, come back to me.
A contest entry
- For the Broken Hearted or those that love someone that doesn't love back by Maili Knephthan.
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it is sad ,but i love what you wrote
well done
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I like that.
Tell her what you miss about her. The intimate things. The things that she didn't know about herself. Like how she inhales deeper than she exhales when she sleeps or something. Tell her what you miss.
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touching
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Thanks a lot
Thanks for the comments poemboomer666, also welcome to the site, I didn't realise you'd only just joined, hope you enjoy your stay. -
Thank you
Thanks a lot for your kind comments poemboomer666, they were most appreciated.
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This was deeply touching and very close to what I am feeling. I miss him and want him back. I keep asking the goddess to bring him back but so far nothing has happened. I know how this feels Thank you for sharing.
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SO DEEPLY TOUCHING!!!!
We often say or do things which later we wish we could take back.
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