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moons for chargers, suns through the windows.




rewinds have sharp teeth,
accented by chestfuls of brave notes.
toes soaked in rushes of rust,
damp passports dangle for fear of the sky
or hungry earthworms;
air at the surface.



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Picture Prompt [Prompt No. 2]

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  • Mango Memories gold member
    November 1
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    oh lala !


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    June 30
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    Very good.


  • etoile
    June 30

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    nice take on the prompt, I really like all the imagery you have here.
    'rushes of rust' <-- that's an awesome line. and the line after is brilliant. awesome write.

    goodluck and thanks for entering