demon child,
coming to terms with her eyes-
red veined & alert for lizard skies
& cowboy hunts;
signs of life.
crops circling around rigid mindsets,
challenging the abnormal,
playing with their numb time.
raven feathers
dripping into clouds,
teasing the shoreline with
white paper paths &
the pursuit of heart chemicals.
A contest entry
- :) by Veronica Leigh.
900 points, ended August 9, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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whoaa.
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This is good and has some interesting and creative lines. Great job and thank you for entering my contest.
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coming to terms with her eyes
-thats a really stellar line. i love the way it sounds and the intention behind it.
that first stanza had excellent rythm.
playing with their numb time
-great line.
last stanza is very beautiful.
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