Like the grains of sand,
the light of Love that I've held inside;
eager to share
with that 'one' person
who makes me feel
like the Queen
that I was born to be;
that I am
that I deserve,
has become -Dim
and as each moment goes by
I start to sink
into the dark corners of my mind,
I start too
Hide,
beneath my True feelings
of admitting that
I am
more alone,
together.
-And my heart...cries.
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feeling you on this one too hun
so raw, honest, deep and powerfully you...
restake your thrown babe
Tasha
ps - these lines, I would add a comma after deserve just to seperate the thoughts
"that I deserve,
has become -Dim"
and "i start TO hide"
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U know I appreciate you...always
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nice expression of the heart's recognition - particularly "more alone, together". I love the sense of longing to be cherished depicted here. lovely poem.
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Thanks again
Rick I appreciarte your comment on this.
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feeling you
been there sweetheart.
I can really identify with this poem.
Sometimes you feel like a nut and
sometimes you don't.
Whatever life throws your way will
never change who you are.
Phenomenal Woman, that's you
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Ty
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Powerful write, Sis. Especially the part of being more alone while together with someone. Sadly there can be so much truth to that. Such as if people are emotionally unavailable or if people just don't show enough respect and care for another. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.
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Thank you lil sis
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This is some strong, but sad words of reality in many cases. Where the heart is hurting and it affects the emotions so badly, you seem to be suffocating from a love not truly promised. This ia a well written free verse......love ya...g'momma
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Thank gmomma
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please dont' let me feel this lonely inside don't let me fall threw these clouds on the sky.
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I hope not dear one be strong and keep ur head up.
Take care and thanks for stopping by.
ephiphany
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oh this just hurts..
me my sweet twin..i hate to know you hurt..as sad as your write felt, it was excellently penned..stay strong..
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honesty.....passion fills with each insight
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Thanks mcfreeman
ur comment is greatly appreciated.
Take care and keep in touch.
Eph
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