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undefine

undefine

 

there is this silent knowing in me

if only I knew how to say it

and if I just have the apt words

to express it

 

cause, in between heartbeats

there's an ache

and it speaks your name

it's the only word I understand

 

then, I know I have this silent feeling

but I don't know how to define it

 

I just only have these heartbeats

to tell

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and I don't even know how to write it

 

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 16

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    i understand that ache,
    to love, to feel, beautiful !!

    with love and blessings

    Rend


  • Edie gold member
    July 6

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    "cause, in between heartbeats
    there's an ache
    and it speaks your name"

    this part really speaks to me, that ache, that prolongued desire to understand to express.

    Just beautiful.


  • Malabu
    July 2

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    I can wrap myself in this poem
    it speaks loudly with a soft emotion
    one can not express in words the heartbeats
    they can feel without the eyes and understand what they are feeling
    still expression of heart
    were never more resounding...then in this little recite
    outstanding poem if I may say so
    you're quite the poetess
    mal *rose


  • sharptooth
    July 1

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    i like and understand the concept of silent feeling, and there really is a great challenge in trying to express it...it truly is undefinable.

    so i can relate to this, and i enjoyed reading.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    July 1
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  • Cannonsfire
    July 1

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    It's like when your heart seems to stop beating for that split second, we don't understand why it does but we feel it, then we feel the thud almost as if it beats outside our chests, some think it's fear and other's seem to think it's the movement of a memory that shocks us into understanding it. The heart is truly an amazing thing, this is just beautiful. I think we all need to listen to our hearts much more. Yours my friend writes truth succinctly C


  • thepoetssoul
    June 30

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    The heart tells alot, it has so much to say if we just listen
    Thank you for sharing, smile always.

    Tony

  • dx d by me
    June 30
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    Seems like in this exact place, a billion times a day.

  • Bob Fox
    June 30

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    my

    such wwords of longing and devotion. I wonder why some are so lucky and others just long forr those beautiful words. Excellent poet.

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