Who struck the match, that started the big bang,that gave us planet earth,
gave us Photosynthesis,life's prerequisite and all it’s worth.
Each leaf,each bloom,each flower,and fields of ripened wheat
each ear pollinated, for mankind to eat, by a “lucky mutation”of the honey bee Without which, there’d be no means to sustain life, for you or me,
tell me Mr. scientist, was it an accident of birth, that brought the perfect balance
To sustain life on planet earth, did the seeds that grew the moss that
“became” the world wide forests on the land,
Arrive by express parcel post Darwin I just don’t understand. ?
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This is a bit different and I rather like this George. Well done
Sheila
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I believe that God created this mixed up world for us to live, grow, and write.
Good job hun,
Amber -
It changes to 7.5 for a new write. Nice work!
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That was good. Good points. I believe that GOD did all of that.
Favorite line: Who struck the match, that caused the big bang, that gave us planet earth
Needs improvement: A bit hard to understand
Overall Grade: 7
Nice work.
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Jenny Rose
Many Thanks for your kind comments on "The Big Bang" I have revised it extensively and it flows much better.Best Wishes....George...
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