And it was just like that
moments when I became nothing
breathing in the rancid exhales as sweet perfume
The true uselessness of his existence birthed fear ~ in me..
hard knuckled, twisted tongue he..
And it was then that I began to live
hours atop fingertips & knees
beating heart beneath the erotic drum-like pounding of my skin
The truth in the lies disguised miserably, carved denial ~ onto me..
god-like perfection, yet, not really, he..
And it was then that I decided to break
years crumbling to dust
reassembling as a bitter intention & loving enmity
The truth of violence reconstructing my veins
burned away his hope ~ around me..
subject of my new day, my new prey, me....
A contest entry
- love me like you hated me....(or should it be)....hate me like you loved me? by JinSays.
400 points, ended July 4, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark writes by darkyinsoul.
700 points, ended October 19, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Another beautifully dark piece. You write with a lot of passion.
The truth of violence reconstructing my veins
burned away his hope ~ around me..
subject of my new day, my new prey, me....
Brilliant ending.
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well done
good write you have penned
like these lines..
beating heart beneath the erotic drum-like pounding of my skin
The truth in the lies disguised miserably, carved denial ~ onto me..
god-like perfection, yet, not really, he..
good luck to you in the contest
thanks for the share
Darky
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And it was then that I decided to break
years crumbling to dust
reassembling as a bitter intention & loving enmity
The truth of violence reconstructing my veins
burned away his hope ~ around me..
subject of my new day, my new prey, me....
yep
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love,
jin -
good luck with the contest. I like how you describe the duality of desire...very nicely done. keep up the great work. peace and light always in all ways, kp
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