You see my face
it tells my thought
my expression speaks for me
my soul smiles through my eyes
I need not cry
or laugh or frown
my heart sits on my sleeve
and tells you what I've learned
I lose my reason
and forget my words
you see my hands shake
you see the circles
you see me
and then you dont.
What did you think
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I found this dark, which attracted me to it in the first place. There is also much sadness within this piece. Your emotion comes out here. This is a very deep and powerful piece of writing. Keep it up.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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just go ahead and use learned...it just feels better. other than that, it's perfect! thanks...kp -
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thanks for that
I do appreciate your comments.
its ridiculously late here and i havent slept for quite some time. I think ill be editing stuff like mad after i've rested.
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