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Take Me To Your Fire

As I stir,
my early morning’s tea

beyond the rise of
jasmine mist

my eyes roam past,
the half opened robe

her eyes tell me;
last night’s sin
             
‘was nothing’

compared,

to what’s about to happen,
on the kitchen floor



Author notes

‘DRINKING TEA WITH THE DEVIL’

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  • crivanea
    July 11
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    lol!! love it!!...very creative take from the prompt..superbly written! BRAVO!


  • Rowan gold member
    July 1

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    oh, oh my...
    lol. I feel like a peepin kathy.
    wonderfully seductive.

  • Macsword
    July 1

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    I had to close my eyes half way through this write....WHAT HAPPENED?????

    Congrats on the well received Gold.


    • Malabu
      July 2
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      keep um open you dont want to miss the good parts
      thanks for reeading and commenting


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 1

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    Woah! Way to go! What a write on the prompt. Love it! Thank you for your entry Woohoo!
    Gaylene


  • Naughtygrlred
    June 30
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    mmmm


  • DeJaBlue gold member
    June 30

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    Wow! Boy, that sure sets the imagination into a whirlwind. Very nice.


  • estbelle gold member
    June 30

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    whoa...what a very sexy thought, devilishly sexy


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