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Consequence

Weight of perception,
squeezing containment,
that hold my actions
boxed-
for your manipulation.

Baroque walls
of twisted words
confine me
in your sight.



Author notes

Inspired by:
"Claustrophobia" by ZpanishZcorpio @ flickr.com

~ http://www.flickr.com/photos/7654252@N08/3552670140/ ~

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