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Live With Joy

Love is always best at first,
When passion flames there is only thirst
Age spent will make it worst
For seed of love will dispersed

In your youth there's still time
Rise each morning as the sun,
There is always a hill to climb
Don't left anything undone

Live with joy each moment in time
love is dvine
It is not a word
It is felt not heard

Love thee while ye may,
Time is always flying;
Like a flower opens today,
Tomorrow will be dying.

Don't let everything out your mind
Let every word you speak always be kind
Forgive or you may forever sorry.
Choose carefully before you marry


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  • Bob Fox
    July 6

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    The last line says it all. All to often, when young we confuse love with sex and that is a no no. lol happy writing.

  • has wise words of wisdom...I think you have penned a very smart and useful piece here. thanks for sharing. keep up the good work. peace and light always , KP