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Love

A passionate love, that can only be conceived once in every eternity.
We have such a known love, and cherish it with every ounce of feeling.
Though we are never near, it is felt in our hearts.
Reassuring us that it is still alive.
It weakens us, to a breaking point of no return.
If this love were ever to be lost, our minds would eventually be corrupted by the evils of society, controlling and possessing the words we speak.
Telling us we dont need it and that we dont belong together.
That we should move on with our sorry lives.
But a life without this love would be like dying a slow painful death forever.
We've tried to be without such a love.
It only brought us heartache and a longing for it again.
So we found a way to keep this love to ourselves to not lose it again.
Things may keep us from being with each other but it will always remain.
Until the end of time.
Until the next eternity.
Forever afterwards.

Author notes

this may not be the best poem to come back with..... it sure ain't my best i know that for sure lol. it's just something that popped into my head while i was away from my boyfriend for so long.... it made me sad and when he came back it was like "hey now you've got inspiration..... WRITE A FRICKEN POEM ALREADY!!!!"

honestly i could've done much better and need your help on what needs to be fixed, altered, taken out, or added (or all of them if you're one of those critics )

hey it sux

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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