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Gigantica

Obsessed was she,
Fishnets,sequins and vanity,
Took a potion from the fountain of youth,
But all it revealed was the awful truth.

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    July 3
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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    July 3
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    Neat.
    Is this about that movie, Monsters Vs Aliens?


  • KyleBerg gold member
    July 2

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    Hehe ^_^ how clever and cute.

    I really liked the message of this piece, and the rhyming was quaint, despite not quite flowing in the first two lines. Awesome ending! =)

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