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Initial Love

So incredible to have a love like this,
how lucky am I, some others despise,
I knew what I wanted, because it wanted me,
I could tell precisely when you caught my eye,
one's initial spark so precise in the choosing,
a fire spreads in me, winning or losing,
it'll it burn, and it'll burn till my heart is but ash,
first loves single spark, a thing of the past.

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A slightly metaphoric poem, speaking of first true love ^.^ enjoy... perhaps?

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    June 30

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    Wow. That was absolutely beautiful. The imagery and emotion were phenomenal. Great job.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

  • I love it.