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A Love Forever.

A love I will feel forever?
How will this love make me feel?
Tender warm smiles emerging from deep within?
Singing with joy and fuck like no other?
So beautiful seared in my mind and heart forever?
Will I be like a dove and coo to my betrothed forever?
Have the trust, the love, the lust, the feeling of forever?

Yea….

Forever and ever, forever a love I’d feel forever.

Audrey Evans
6/29/2009

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  • imagineart
    June 30
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    I like it!

    I think the carnal feelings don't have to leave with age...that's what Viagras for!


    • AudreyEvans
      July 13
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      You know baby! Thank you for your comment and support.

      Audrey Evans

  • Bob Fox
    June 30

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    well

    Love forever ? But what happens when age takes the carnal feeling away ? lol How often we confuse love with lust..


    • AudreyEvans
      June 30

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      Wow thatwas a quick responce to my poem, I just added it and poof there you are!
      Thank you for your comment.

      Audrey Evans