Inhaling your essence, desiring you,
as your eyes seer through my flesh.
Subtle scent of sweat upon your skin,
natural aphrodisiac, I covet you.
Adoration explored in rawest form.
A contest entry
- Midnight Quickie by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended June 30, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh yeah this is awesome. So softly seductive and loving. Sums up perfectly the effect my darlin has on me. Your quill spills forth the most incredible and profound words. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Groovy..
The rythm was a bit odd to me.. but maybe it's just me, though I liked it.. quick and simple yet slightly complex..
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I like that rawest form part.'
nicely done
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