Mommy thank you for making me!
I can't wait to come out and hug you
and fall asleep in your arms
I love you mommy
Mommy what is this stuff?
It tastes real bad and makes me head spin
please stop drinking it mommy
your hurting me
Mommy stop putting that stuff in your arm!
It is bad for me
You say it makes you feel good
but that needle can't really be good?
Mommy thank you for having me!
I can see your beautiful face
and hug you real tight
Why do you have all those bruises mommy?
Mommy how was work?
you come home in these weird outfits
you look like your about to go swimming mommy
but why do you have all that money in ur undies?
Mommy why are you comming home with all these men?
Are you having a sleepover?
Then why do you make such strange noises?
Are they hurting you mommy?
Mommy who are all these people
and why are you passing around that smoky stick?
You look weird mommy
please stop
Mommy why are you crying?
You say he left you...that it's my fault
you say i shouldn't have been born
Do you hate me mommy?
Mommy why did you bring that new man home?
he is big and he hits you
and calls you mean names
you should call the cops on him
Mommy something bad happened today
when you were sleeping on the table that strange man cam in my room
he said i was pretty and he touched me
he scares me mommy
Mommy that guy came back!
when you were at work he ame in my room
and he kissed me a lot
he wont let me leave mommy!
Mommy today you told me I was worthless
and that I was the biggest mistake of your life
you told me you hate me
What does that mean mommy?
Mommy please wake up!
Why did that man hit you?
what's that red stuff coming out of your head?
Wake up mommy!
Mommy help me!
that strange guy touched me in bad places!
he held me down and took my nightie off
and he hurt me really bad...i remember fealing my insides tearing
mommy, I'm bleeding!
Mommy I'm dead
that strange guy killed me
Why didn't you save me mommy?
Why didn't you ever say you loved me?
Author notes
~WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!! couldnt think of anything to write about!!!
HUGE WORK IN PROGRESS!!!
need help thinking of a title~
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hey i got a title ..... "Mommy Dearest Why?".... i like the poem it's morbid yet sad I LIKE IT...stupid caps


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wow, this is really good. great job
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I've wrote absolute crap in writers block, but this I have to say doesn't portray crap at all. Insanely emotional I enjoyed this, no matter how sick that sounds.


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wow
well...this is really great what u have...great work

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i think its crap
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it's flippin amuhazing i like it
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